Story Make Your Own: The End

Discussion in 'Fan Stories' started by Maraoone, May 31, 2012.

  1. Bitchy

    Maraoone Sage Mouse

    Now, as most of you know, zombies are in vogue and have become the new favorite type of apocalypse :D
    I became inspired by this one site. There, they would pick some writers. Then, they would pretend to be in a Battle Royale-like scenario. The participants would write their stories, narrating what they were doing (killing, chasing others, running from others, finding food etc.).
    Now, the setting will be the same, except in takes place in TFM :D and you would be dealing with a zombie apocalypse. For convenience, you will be using your nickname. Since you need a premise, here goes...
    NOTE: This is probably my first time ever to make a story, so it might not be perfect -.-

    Here's the premise.

    RULES:
    - You must sign up before you write a story. There are now 24 spots.
    - Although you may inject some humor if you wish, you can't be like:
    I will tell you when the story ends. Also, if you're inactive for a long time, I'll simply kill you off. MUAHAHAH
    - If your character does die, you can continue the story, but as a zombie. You could also leave, or just become a spectator.
    - You can do ANYTHING. You could move to the dark, dark world of Aaaah! (yes, it still exists). You could hole yourself up in NL (that server has as little as 7 mice on at the same time, so it is quite plausible). You could even build a network of tunnels between tribe houses.
    - It must be continuous with the previous post.
    - You can't go TOO off-the-rails.
    Example:
    How to Sign Up:
    I have reopened applications. It may be slightly more difficult considering the fact that we're already 37 pages into several plotlines, so here's how you sign up. You must PM me. After you PM me, I will brief you on what has happened so far and then confirm you. You may only start writing once you are confirmed.
    The End
    It was October of 2012 (yes, this takes place in the future). All the mice had been having lots of fun with the new Halloween event. Tig had brought back the scrolling map from last year. This time, however, there were zombies! :D A mouse named *Souris_1 had been randomly selected as the first zombie of the event. Since he was a newbie, he only managed to infect a few mice. However, this started one of TFM's biggest nightmares... The next map, all that were infected were still zombies. No matter what room they went to, they weren't able to change back. They could still infect, but a bug in the coding made it so that all those infected couldn't speak, emote, or even die. They just ran & ran, continuing to infect the other mice. No matter what the shamans did, whether they trapped the infected or threw cannons at them, they just respawned and kept coming back. Panic spread across all servers. Soon, 95% of TFM was infected. No one knew where the admins or some of the mods had gone. The survivors were left to fend for themselves...



    Survivors:
    1.) Confusedone
    2.) Icanhasdonut
    4.) Polygone
    5.) Dawnlife
    6.) Zahile
    9.) Sourischan
    10.) Cheygirl
    13.) Kittiepurrie
    15.) Jiygs
    16.) Thegreenrat
    17.) Ravinmad
    18.) Adiline
    19.) Xinaug

    Fallen:
    3.) Gzgregory
    7.) Iisbored
    8.) Cheerydog
    11.) Jjaakkee
    12.) Ghostifyxx
    14.) Ethansantiag
    Alive:
    - Green- still alive
    - Orange- pseudo-active (has not made post recently, but storyline is continued by - another person)
    - Purple- currently inactive
    - Dark green - has ended his/her story and survived
    Died:
    - Blue- quit/hasn't been on for 30 days but has not had his/her death written yet
    - Brown - is either zombified/ripped to bits
    - Black- has not yet written but has joined

    Here are some links:
    For those that want a more organzied version of the story: http://usernameloljk.deviantart.com/ (not yet complete)

    For the group (to be used for future Make Your Own's)
    http://cheese.formice.com/forum/cz-groups/make-your-own-story.561/group-detail

    VERY loosely based off of SOTF: http://s10.zetaboards.com/SOTF_V2/index/

    Number of survivors remaining as of Month 1:
    Total- 865
    BR- 465
    TR- 122
    ES- 98
    EN- 60
    FR- 61
    RU- 25
    PL- 9
    VK- 9
    HU- 7
    NL- 4
    ID - 3
    RO - 2
    CN- 0

    Story Posts (open)
    Story Posts (open)

    Maraoone (open)
    Maraoone (open)

    Entry 1: Page 2, Post #35
    Entry 2: Page 5, Post #84
    Entry 3: Page 9, Post #168
    Entry 4: Page 14, Post #261
    Entry 5: Page 15, Post #296
    Entry 6: Page 17, Post #337
    Entry 7: Page 27, Post #526
    Entry 8: Page 27, Post #530
    Entry 9: Page 28, Post #551
    Entry 10: Page 29, Post #565
    Entry 11: Page 30, Post #591
    Entry 12: Page 31, Post #625
    Almost-All-Knowing Narrator (open)
    Almost-All-Knowing Narrator (open)

    Update 1: Page 13, Post #250
    Post 1: Page 15, Post #296
    Update 2: Page 21, Post #418
    CN's End: Page 21, Post #418
    Dlilah's Downfall: Page 25, Post #485, #487 and #489

    Update 3: Page 31, Post #610


    Gzgregory (open)
    Gzgregory (open)

    Part 1: Page 2, Post #37
    Part 2: Page 5, Post #85
    Part 3: Page 6, Post #116
    Part 4: Page 8, Post #148

    Cheygirl (open)
    Cheygirl (open)

    Day 1: Page 2, Post #40
    Day 2: Page 5, Post #88
    Day 3, Part 1: Page 6, Post #105
    Day 3, Part 2: Page 7, Post #139
    Day 4, Part 1: Page 14, Post #272
    Day 4, Part 2: Page 15, Post #281
    Day 5: Page 18, Post #348
    Day 6: Page 20, Post #381
    Post 9: Page 27, Post #537

    Sourischan (open)
    Sourischan (open)

    Part 1: Page 3, Post #41
    Part 2: Page 9, Post #179

    Icanhasdonut (open)
    Icanhasdonut (open)

    Part 1: Page 3, Post #42
    Part 2: Page 6, Post #103
    Part 3: Page 7, Post #133
    Part 4: Page 12, Post #225
    Part 5: Page 15, Post #299
    Part 6: Page 16, Post #313
    Part 7: Page 21, Post #405 (first ending)
    Part 8: Page 26, Post #513
    Part 9: Page 26, Post #519
    Part 10: Page 31, Post #601

    Part 11: Page 31, Post #608

    Part 12: Page 31, Post #628

    Part 13: Page 31, Post #631

    Kittiepurrie (open)
    Kittiepurrie (open)

    Part 1: Page 3, Post #43
    Part 2: Page 3, Post #55
    Part 3: Page 5, Post #81
    Part 4: Page 6, Post #119
    Part 5: Page 18, Post #345
    Part 6: Page 29, Post #580

    Part 7: Page 31, Post #624

    Cheerydog (open)
    Cheerydog (open)

    Part 1: Page 3, Post #44
    Part 2: Page 4, Post #63
    Part 3: Page 6, Post #101
    Part 4: Page 10, Post #196
    Part 5: Page 13, Post #259
    Part 6: Page 16, Post #316
    Part 7: Page 18, Post #358
    Part 8: Page 20, Post #396
    Part 9: Page 22, Post #440
    Part 10: Page 28, Post #541 (ending)

    Polygone (open)
    Polygone (open)

    Part 1: Page 3, Post #50
    Part 2: Page 4, Post #69 (._.)
    Part 3: Page 6, Post #102
    Part 4: Page 6, Post #104
    Part 5: Page 8, Post #151
    Part 6: Page 9, Post #177
    Part 7: Page 11, Post #202
    Part 8: Page 14, Post #274
    Part 9: Page 15, Post #285
    Part 10: Page 15, Post #288
    Part 11: Page 15, Post #290
    Part 12: Page 17, Post #334
    Part 13: Page 18, Post #353
    Part 14: Page 18, Post #356
    Part 15: Page 22, Post #433
    Part 16: Page 22, Post #436
    Part 17: Page 22, Post #438
    Part 18: Page 23, Post #444
    Part 19: Page 23, Post #446
    Part 20: Page 24, Post #479
    Part 21: Page 25, Post #481
    Part 22: Page 25, Post #483
    Part 23: Page 25, Post #497
    Part 24: Page 26, Post #507
    Part 25: Page 26, Post #512
    Part 26: Page 26, Post #516
    Part 27: Page 26, Post #518
    Part 28: Page 30, Post #600

    Part 29: Page 31, Post #626

    Part 30: Page 31, Post #629

    Iisbored (open)
    Iisbored (open)

    Post 1: Page 5, Post #98
    Post 2: Page 17, Post #333

    Jjaakkee (open)
    Jjaakkee (open)

    Part 1: Page 6, Post #113
    Part 2: Page 8, Post #152
    Part 3: Page 24, Post #461 (ending)

    Confusedone (open)
    Confusedone (open)

    Chapter 1: Page 7, Post #121
    To-do List: Page 9, Post #162
    Chapter 2: Page 10, Post #199
    Chapter 3: Page 13, Post #251
    Chapter 4: Page 15, Post #284

    Jjygs (open)
    Jjygs (open)

    Chapter 1: Page 7, Post #131
    Chapter 2: Page 8, Post #160
    Chapter 3: Page 10, Post #200
    Chapter 4: Page 14, Post #273

    Zahile (open)
    Zahile (open)

    Post 1: Page 8, Post #154
    Post 2: Page 8, Post #156
    Post 3: Page 12, Post #239
    Post 4: Page 23, Post #450

    Thegreenrat (open)
    Thegreenrat (open)

    Part 1: Page 11, Post #201
    Part 2: Page 12, Post #238
    Part 3: Page 16, Post #302

    Ghostifyxx (open)
    Ghostifyxx (open)

    Part 1: Page 12, Post #230

    Dawnlife (open)
    Dawnlife (open)

    Post 1: Page 22, Post #425
    Post 2: Page 23, Post #452
    Post 3: Page 24, Post #470

    Ravinmad (open)
    Ravinmad (open)

    Post 1: Page 28, Post #548
    Post 2: Page 28, Post #560
    Post 3: Page 29, Post #569
    Post 4: Page 29, Post #573
    Post 5: Page 30, Post #584
    Post 6: Page 30, Post #586

    Adiline (open)
    Adiline (open)

    Post 1: Page 29, Post #564


    Xinaug (open)
    Xinaug (open)

    Post 1: Page 31, Post #607
    Post 2: Page 31, Post #614


    Map of Transformice (open)
    Map of Transformice (open)

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  2. Wishful

    Confusedone Mouse Goddess

    Solution:
    don't play till the bug is fixed
    lol joke XD
  3. Bitchy

    Maraoone Sage Mouse

    T^T are you signing up?
  4. Wishful

    Confusedone Mouse Goddess

    idk
    maybe
    idk
    ima wait for other people to join :troll:
  5. Bitchy

    Maraoone Sage Mouse

    Yeah. btw, you can only start once there are 10+ spots.
  6. Wishful

    Confusedone Mouse Goddess

    Hmm okay then
  7. Breezy

    Icanhasdonut Master of Cheese

    Ooh Ooh I joined
  8. Bitchy

    Maraoone Sage Mouse

    Yay! So, that's one, maybe two zombies surviors :D
  9. Breezy

    Icanhasdonut Master of Cheese

    Commencing spamathon in 3...2...1... ATTACCCK
  10. Sick

    Iisbored Master of Cheese

    I suppose I'll join. But also what are the Physics of Transformice in this game. I mean in some stories, there are like actual rooms and such, while in others Transformice is very different (such as in mine Transformice has yet to be built, but later when it is built it is a multidimensional prison masquerading as a game). Also, do shaman have specific magical abilities outside of those in the game such as mastery of an element such as fire, or water, or only the ability to create things that are mentioned in the game.

    Also, are you saying that we have to put ourselves into a scenario in which we would most likely die, or can we put others in a scenario in which they might die. And if someone else puts it so that we could die, can we have a chance to save ourselves as long as it's logical, within our ability, and not deus ex machina.

    Finally are we writing these one after another so that we can base our events on whatever the last person said happened, or if we want to write in a confrontation, must we first communicate our ideas with each other, or is it a complete isolation scenario. (As you can see I've never done this before, although I had wanted to, and I'm not entirely sure how it goes).
  11. Depressed

    Dawnlife Mouse Goddess

  12. Creeping

    Polygone Slayer of Anvil God

    *A wild Polygone has appeared!*
    *Polygone has joined the fight*
    *Polygone forgot his gun*
    @~@
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  13. Musical

    Gzgregory FR Minimod

    Kewl RPG, I'm in.
  14. LOLOL

    Zahile Mouse Goddess

    i join pls
  15. Breezy

    Icanhasdonut Master of Cheese

    .-. The concept is to just say in and ask like a 5 word question.
  16. Wishful

    Confusedone Mouse Goddess

    (decided to join)
    OKay
    but i dun wanna die
  17. Smug

    CheeryDog Master of Cheese

    I'm willing to give this some sort of try, if my character works, I may actually start writing the fan story I want to write but have never been bothered to write.
  18. Bitchy

    Maraoone Sage Mouse

    Ooh, so many people joining :D
    Anyways...
    @ Iisbored: Um... banana? .-. Anyways, as the title says, this story takes place near the end of TFM. It's kind of like this infinitely big place, but with regions known as rooms. I just made this up now XD but that's how TFM is like in my story.
    - The shamans only have their normal in-game powers. It won't matter much, since almost all of them became zombies D:
    - I'm not saying you have to die. But your scenario is VERY deadly (95% of TFM trying to chase you down :eek:) so you can die quite easily. If some evil mau5 tries to put you in a scenario in which you might die, yes you can save yourself, but in a LOGICAL way. And if you accidentally place yourself in an no-win situation (i.e. get surrounded by a bunch of zombies) and have no way out, that's when you die.
    - We have to write these based on what the last one said.
  19. Sick

    Iisbored Master of Cheese

    Thank-you.
  20. Bitchy

    Maraoone Sage Mouse

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