Story Mouse School

Discussion in 'Fan Stories' started by CheeryDog, Jun 12, 2012.

  1. Smug

    CheeryDog Master of Cheese

    I have decided that I am going to attempt to write this idea up, however right now, I'm only going to give you a basic plot of what my ideas have lead to.
    This idea originated in my mind in November 2008, however back then it was too do with cats, one night after my cat had joined me in bed. This was after my brother had just attempted to write a novel in a month. (NaNoWriMo) and I had been inspired by his work. (though that has gotten anywhere since then, though he did finish it, it never ended up being edited afterwards.) He has also done from fanfics of Harry Potter, I guess they helped inspire the idea of making it Transformice orientated. (I think I came up with making it based in the Transformice World with it still existing in the back of my mind in early 2011)
    I never started typing up this idea back then, so I have no idea what it is going to turn out like.
    This is going to start and finish outside of Transformice.
    Blurb? (basic plot outline) (open)
    After discovering an abandoned warehouse while exploring their new neighbour, three siblings decide to go explore inside it. In this warehouse they find a machine which turns them into mice. They are then trapped in mouse form and are need to work out a way to escape and get back to civilisation.

    There may be changes to that very basic outline and probably will be as if I left it at that it wouldn't end up being a good story (and also wouldn't fit the title I'm giving this story). I was going to type more, but then I realised I was going to end up writing the whole thing out there.

    Anyway I'm probably going to need some characters, unless I just invent names when I start writing it, so if you wish to join please reply. I have no set ideas of how I need my characters to behave, so you may suggest some information if you want to be one, then I will decide whether I keep it all or not.
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  2. Wishful

    Confusedone Mouse Goddess

    May i join?

    Here is ma joining form :D
    Show Spoiler

    Name:Confusedone
    Gender:Male
    Role: Good/Bad
    Clothes:Spiky blue hair, Halloween scarf, Nerd glasses and Cheese earring on right ear.Sometimes wearing phoenix mask
    Personality: creative, intelligent, kind, skilled (mostly making stuff, healing and battling but only battles when it is really needed but if is just to much then making stuff and healing) and fast and quick or agile
    Extra:Scar on right eye and carries a staff-like stick.
    Good at Magic, bow and arrow(and some melee and range weapons too XD)

    Oh and i am thinking a bit of changing or adding something to the plot...
    but then again it will sound a bit like other stories...
  3. Smug

    CheeryDog Master of Cheese

    I shall place you somewhere in the story. This story probably won't have many mice battles if any at all since I don't think that's what my plan is. (also I find cannons wars to be too boring)
    To those reading this first part I'm writing, it hasn't got into Transformice yet. - that probably won't happen fully until quite a few parts into this story. I probably won't even mention a mouse until the third part.
    I'm going to put all the parts of this story into code tags since I haven't written them in word before hand, and am trusting Google chrome's spell checking.

    I was going to start this now, but my mind has gone blank as to how it is going to start - I think that will probably be the hard bit. Followed by the other hardbits of continuning in the middle and finishing if I make it that far.

    (shut up bot) Anyway here's goes nothing! and also make that I'm writing in quote tags since I can't bold in code.
    I'm starting with invented names to start with (based on my actual cat's names since one of them helped me come up with the idea)
    There we go one part down, only 64201+x more to go.
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  4. Bitchy

    Maraoone Sage Mouse

    so... ish this story dead?
  5. Spooky

    Jjygs Master of Cheese

    dunno seemed ok to me,maby theres not enough people cheering him on

    Cherry you can do it!! I BELIEVE ON YOU!!!
  6. Smug

    CheeryDog Master of Cheese

    I just didn't want the bot to yell at me again :s. (though I don't know what the waiting time on that is, if there is one) Also don't know exactly where I'm going with stuff, I should plan this out more.
    Anyway...
    I could explain happening inside the house, but I don't think that will get to the point of this story. (and would put off my scheduled mouse meeting) Also this is just a filler part of conversation, since there's nothing interesting about the street (that I can be bothered describing anyway since it's not vital to the story). Technically I could have just ignored this part and skipped to the next part, but then it wouldn't flow as well.
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  7. Wishful

    Confusedone Mouse Goddess

    oooh

    please do continue
  8. Smug

    CheeryDog Master of Cheese

    (shut up again bot)
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  9. Wishful

    Confusedone Mouse Goddess

    le posting ...
  10. Lurking

    Moosemaster Professional Mouse

    If it's not too late, i would really appreciate it if there was a way to include me! My preference would be to look like a total asshole for the entire story and then at the end it is revealed that I'm actually one of the good guys :) like Snape I suppose! OR DARTH FUCKIN VADER. AND I KILL MY FUCKIN BADASS MASTER. or something :D
  11. Creeping

    Polygone Slayer of Anvil God

    Hai poly likes this story and would like to join if he could.
  12. Smug

    CheeryDog Master of Cheese

    I've been lazy about writing this and/or writer's block blah blah blah idk. Also insert this new town name back at the story, it's the only may I can make this part work.

    I didn't realise I was going to do such a short part, I think I would have done it sooner had I invented the town name the other times I went to attempt to write this.
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  13. Wishful

    Confusedone Mouse Goddess

    (everyone is having a writer's block...)

    um lol?
  14. Creeping

    Polygone Slayer of Anvil God

    xD Nice town name, real original. ;D
  15. Trollish

    Rarudumatu Cheese Enthusiast

    eu queria saber como vc faz isso, de colocar a imagem do rato...
  16. Cheerful

    Ntao Noobie Mouse

    I WAN TOO:rainbowomg:

    i wan tooo
  17. Trollish

    Rarudumatu Cheese Enthusiast

    Ntao, moderator?
  18. Cheerful

    Ntao Noobie Mouse

    OK!

    ok ill be one of the mods then will also accidentally turned into mice follows the lead roles as a "advisor"


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  19. Smug

    CheeryDog Master of Cheese

    @Rarudumatu Please speak English. I am incapable of understanding that post.
    @Ntao If I feel the need to use mods in my story, they will be real ones. (you can be included as a character when I get up to the stage of actually needing some though)

  20. Creeping

    Polygone Slayer of Anvil God

    Intersection, not interception. And first sentance should be sitting on the step, not sitting the step. Poor Malcom. x3

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